nb27-
This clip is from a section of the nail bar scene where the girls are talking about Amy and Ryan. I think that the framing of the clip is really good as you can fully see Hayley, Hannah and Jenny, and the over the shoulder shot of Bella is done correctly. The audio of Bella is slightly muffled due to her facing away but most of it is perfectly audible.
nb26-
This clip is the same as nb27 but isn't the full thing. This clip isn't really useable as it messes up as Bella says her line before Hayley says hers the end. Also the audio is slightly quieter at the beginning.
nb25-
The audio at the beginning of this clip is a lot better than nb27 and nb26. However the part where Hayley says 'I was just tryna lighten the mood' is a bit too quiet so possibly making this clip unusable.
nb24-
This clip is meant to go after Cheryl has finished her story with Jeremy and Carl. The framing of this clip is done well and the audio is pretty consistent all the way through. This clip runs very smoothly overall so would definitely be a possibility to use within the final product. The laughter within the clip between the girls is very natural as well.
nb23-
This clip is unusable as the girls all start laughing as soon as the acting starts. However, the framing and quality of the clip is good.
nb22-
This clip is the same part of the episode nb27/26/25. I think that the clip is fine but not as smooth as the other ones so this may not be the right one to use.
nb20-
This clip is unusable as Flic interrupts the acting due to the positioning of the frame not being correct.
nb19-
The quality and framing of this clip is perfectly fine, however it is probably not useable as the girls get some of the lines wrong so the end isn't finished properly.
nb18-
This clip is the first scene from the nail bar. It would be fine to use, however the framing and quality of this clip isn't as good as the others above. It isn't unusable just not as good as the others.
nb16-
This clip comes after Cheryl has told part of her story between Jeremy and Carl. It can't really be used within the final episode as the girls are supposed to laugh after Cheryl says 'I can't help that all the boys want me' and without that the scene doesn't really make sense.
nb15-
This clip is a lot better than nb16, however the laughter within the scene needs to be more prominent in order for things to carry on and make sense.
nb14-
We tried something different in this clip as Bella mimics what Hannah says, the girls laugh after and Jenny says 'Alright Frankie'. After doing this we decided that the mimicking was good but Jenny just stick with just saying 'Alright guys'.
nb13-
The framing and content of this clip is really good, therefore I think that this clip is completely fine to use.
nb11-
The framing of this clip was good as it was a good over the shoulder shot but Blaze often looks at the camera and smiles/laughs therefore meaning we can't really use this clip.
nb10-
The framing and audio quality of this clip is good and nothing really goes wrong so I think that this clip would be a good one to use.
nb9-
This is the same part of the script as nb10 however Hannah slightly messes up her lines so this clip isn't needed. Also, Jenny looks down to her magazine quite a lot so its obvious that she is looking at her lines.
nb8-
This clip is not useable as it is just Hannah talking while the camera is still on.
nb7-
The first part of this clip is perfectly useable, however the girls start laughing towards the end, therefore probabaly meaning that we can't use it as this part needs to be just one shot.
nb6-
This clip is unusable as the girls all start laughing due to Blaze saying her line a lot louder than before.
nb5-
This clip is when Cheryl is explaining why she got with her lads brother. The framing and acting is all completely fine in the clip therefore meaning it would be able to be used in the final product.
nb4-
This clip is the same as nb5 and again it would be good to use in the final thing.
nb3-
This clip is the first few lines of the nail bar scene, it starts off fine and the framing is good, but Blaze drops a nail polish which causes Bella to start laughing therefore meaning we can't use this clip.
nb2-
This clip could be improved in terms of the audio but I think it would be good enough to use in the final product.
nb1-
This is just a clip of us being quiet to see if there is any background noise. This obviously won't be used in any part of the final show.
Clip 1-
This clip is unusable as it just a behind shot of Bella with laughter in the background.
nb28-
This clip is perfectly fine to use as the framing and audio is good.
nb29-
This clip is probably the best out of the few we got for this section of the nail bar scene. The audio is really good and the framing is fine. Hannah pulls a face at the end but it should be fine to edit out.
nb31-
The first part of this clip can't really be used as Hayley starts laughing. Also the audio isn't as good in this clip therefore making it less likely to be used.
nb32-
The first part of this clip is really good. The quality is very good as well as the framing and audio. Also the fact that it is a close up of the conversation between Hannah and Bella works really well.
nb36-
This clip would be good to use in the final product as the framing and audio is of a fairly high quality and the acting is all good.
nb35-
This clip is just a few seconds of in between takes, it does not need to be used.
nb34-
This clip is all fine, apart from the fact that Miss made the point that Hayley needed to be a bit louder.
nb33-
This clip is slightly too loud and the end goes wrong so it can't really be used.
ah1-
This is a mid shot/close up of George and his reaction of finding out 'Amy' is pregnant. This clip is good as the camera is set up well and the lighting is appropriate in order to convey his emotion. We ensured there was no background noise in order to make the scene as dramatic as possible-therefore this clip is definitely fit to use in the final product.
ah4-
This is a mid close up of George and Bella acting as Amy as Ryan. It is the moment when Amy tells Ryan she is pregnant. I think the positioning of the camera in this clip is very effective as we can see the reaction of both people. The lighting is also good therefore meaning that this clip can definitely be used.
ah7-
This clip is another shot of just George. The positioning and lighting is all good up until the end as George's head gets cut off when he stands up straight. Therefore this means that the start of this clip would be fine to use but the end wouldn't due to the camera positioning.
ah5-
This is a mid close up of Bella and George side profile. The lighting is slightly dark but I think that is appropriate for the content of the scene as it is quite tense. The positioning of the camera is fine as well as they are both in shot and can see their reactions clearly. The end of this clip is unusable as George hits the other camera so the filming had to stop.
ah2-
This is a clip of George coming through the kitchen door. The lighting is slightly too low and the camera positioning isn't quite right in order to capture the feeling of the scene. This clip could still be used but there are others that would be more suitable.
ah3-
This clip is a mid close up of George. The lighting and camera work is suitable for the content as it is the most tense part of the scene, therefore darker and closer footage is more suitable.
ah6-
This clip is similar to ah3. The positioning is slightly better as there is no window in the background of the shot. The lighting is again very suitable for the context of the scene, and this clip could definitely be used in the final product.
Amy's house.
ah1-
This is a mid shot/close up of George and his reaction of finding out 'Amy' is pregnant. This clip is good as the camera is set up well and the lighting is appropriate in order to convey his emotion. We ensured there was no background noise in order to make the scene as dramatic as possible-therefore this clip is definitely fit to use in the final product.
ah4-
This is a mid close up of George and Bella acting as Amy as Ryan. It is the moment when Amy tells Ryan she is pregant. I think the positioning of the camera in this clip is very effective as we can see the reaction of both people. The lighting is also good therefore meaning that this clip can definitely be used.
ah7-
This clip is another shot of just George. The positioning and lighting is all good up until the end as George's head gets cut off when he stands up straight. Therefore this means that the start of this clip would be fine to use but the end wouldn't due to the camera positioning.
ah5-
This is a mid close up of Bella and George side profile. The lighting is slightly dark but I think that is appropriate for the content of the scene as it is quite tense. The positioning of the camera is fine as well as they are both in shot and can see their reactions clearly. The end of this clip is unusable as George hits the other camera so the filming had to stop.
ah2-
This is a clip of George coming through the kitchen door. The lighting is slightly too low and the camera positioning isn't quite right in order to capture the feeling of the scene. This clip could still be used but there are others that would be more suitable.
ah3-
This clip is a mid close up of George. The lighting and camera work is suitable for the content as it is the most tense part of the scene, therefore darker and closer footage is more suitable.
ah6-
This clip is similar to ah3. The positioning is slightly better as there is no window in the background of the shot. The lighting is again very suitable for the context of the scene, and this clip could definitely be used in the final product.
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